rough cut

Video criteria

1. Holding a steady shot, where appropriate
2. Framing a shot, including + excluding elements as appropriate
3. Using a variety of shot distances
4. Shooting material appropriate to the task set
5. Selecting mise en scene including colour, lighting, objects + setting
6. Editing so that the meaning is appropriate to the viewer
7. Using titles appropriately

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This is our rough cut:





Feedback:

Mise en scene: Location is of bedrooms and street shots, costumes are stereotypical which show clearly the genre and target audience . Realistic natural lighting. Props: phone, shag list, games console - show characters personalities.

Camerawork: Nice choice of camera angles and panning works well towards the end, successful match on action shot.

Editing: Looks quite realistic, split screening works well.

Sound: Good use of diagetic and non diagetic, especially in the scene where the boy is playing on his xbox.

Generic Conventions: Overall the piece fits the 'teenage romantic comedy' well, particularly the stereotypical characters in their home environment.