Preliminary Task

Feedback from R1-16

-We like the logo, although we think that there is too much of a pause before the 'ting' and the title comes up.
-WE also liked seeing the stereo because it is the source of the music.
-Seeing into the draws is a really good way of seeing the characters different personalities.
-The finishing each others sentence was really good because it shows a link between characters.
-The music is good but doesnt flow as well as it could do.
=)

Feedback

- Good camera shots when doing the crane shot of the draw and close up of the music being switched on.
- Bit too much cheese
- Title could be soother at the end.
- Good acting and props, when showing the geeky character and Girl's contrast.
- Good use of double shots
- Running across the road to see her was a bit weird at the end, looked strange tbh.
- Joe Legg is underrated and you don't know a good thing when you see one.

R1-14 feedback

Music works well with the genre.
Wind lets down ending scene.
shag list is a bit unrealistic.
logo is effective.
Acting is good, perhaps a little bit over acting in some parts.
Good camera shots, steady, and match on match action.

FINAL!

We now have our final version of our film opening!

Titles throughout opening

1. Production: Mwah Movies
2. Directed by: Thomas Anderson
3. Produced by: Samantha Wood

Actors

4. Rojiar Mahdavi
5. Ashley Andrews
6. Hayley Cannon
7. Charlie Bryan

Response to test screening

- add sound track of call of duty to scene where Ashley is playing console
- add more close ups to scene where Rojiar is on the phone
- Add titles
- Possibly change end title of movie, may move to beginning of opening